Last test

I learned about many things in Writing Ⅲ, Ⅳ for a  year. I reflect about essay prep., essays, portfolios, book reviews and peer-to-peer commentary.

I wrote some essay prep.. First I make mind-map to make my clear thinking about essay prep.. Based on the mind-map, I wrote essay prep.. I wrote it not stopping my hands, wrote all what I think. After I finish to write all sentences, I rewrite it to correct sentences. And I check spell mis.

Based on essay prep. I wtote essays. I rewrite it correctly, more than 5 sentenses each paragraphs, more than about 500 wards, more than 7 paragraphs and to be more good essays.

I read many books for book reviews. I read same piblisher books and famouse story, so it is many types of books. I reviewed it to write my favorite esntense, intorodction of the book and my impressions. My bibliographies developed to read various type of books and writer.

I commented on my peers posts like free-writing, essays and book reviews. I comment my impressions, questions and my opinions about them posts. Most of my comment is impressions and questions. But I sometimes commented my opinions to my peers know them mistaken.

When I posted book reviews or essays, I recorded it on my portfolios. I can know my records seeing portfolios. For example, dates I wrote, titles of its, words count, comments and links. So I can reflect my book reviews and eaasys easily.

Hair color

I colored my hair from brawn to black because of 20th celebration. I think black hair match with kimono. So I changed my hair color. But my hair is damaged because I colored it often. I want to treatment in salon. There is hair salon which is low price near my house. I did treatment there before. This massage is used soda water. It was very nice! My hair came back like before.

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3. August

Today, I got up lately. I heard tapped sound from next door. It's Ayumi's house. Anita's relations children came there. They were very beautiful. 
We went to carve festival, it was strange things. I saw many strange things. I enjoyed it. Band came there, they were very cool. I love one of them. I shake hands with one of them because he is Anita's friend.
After that, we went hamburger shop to have launch, very good!! 

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Test

I finished 5 test already. I was very glad, but I have to take 10 test. That's too bad. I hate test very much. I will finished test on February 3. My birth day is next day, so it is safe. After I finished last test, I will go to eat yakiniku with my friend. I am looking forward to go there!

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2. August

We learned about American marriage. It very differ from that of Japan. American marriage celemony need a lot of money like can built a house. People don't lental dress, they bought it.。
Afternoon, Japanese who lives in Minnesota talked with us. Her name is Naomi, she was cool.
Today, after school, we went Japanese restaurant. It was Fujiya. It was stylish and cool. I ate tenpura appetizer. It was very good, I was excited. 
And we went to have ice cream, izzy's ice cream. It was very yummy, very very yummy. Thank you Tom and Lisa!

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1. August

Today, we went to beach. Everyone enter in the sea, but I didn't do that.. There were playing valley place, so I was enjoyed there. After that, we rode a horse. I worried very much whether I fall or not. It was ok. My born is pushed, so it was hurt. Oh my god! And I stared mascle ache because of playing tennis.
Dinner was pasta with shrimp and bread, it was very good! I was happy. I helped her making salad, ut it was difficult to cut and peering.

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31. July

Today, we talked with American who lives in Japan. She had been stayed in Tochigi.
At launch, I had a nun.
We did family panel discussion.
At night, we went to watch a baseball game with Ned's family. I lent a cap and a T-shirts of Twins from Lisa. She wore pink stripe, Tom wore black stripe. There were many caps in stadium. It was very cute, but very high price. Even if not holiday, many people went there, so I was very surprised. I had never gone to watch pro baseball game in Japan, so it was very exciting. Surprising, twins got a homerun, very great!

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