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Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Essay 2-02b: Love my room

My favorite place is my room in my house. It has been used by me for 19 years. My room's main attractions are are there is large space, there are a lot of my collections. I can be relax there and I can decorate my room by myself. So my room is my world.

My room is large, and most everyone knows, big rooms are better than small rooms. Windows and doors are big, they are very open. There are not so much furniture there. There are only desk, bed, shelf and small desk in my room. Closet is inside in the wall. It makes the room more large.  There are collections of manicures, manga, DVDs and candles in my room. People tends to buy what is cheap and cute. Manicures of CANMAKE is it. There are many DVDs of western movies. Favorite smells differ deppending on people and smells  differ depending on rooms. For example, there are smells like sweet and fresh.    I don't like smells like perfume, but I like candles. So it is important to shape or design for me. Recently, I like candles of sweets shapes. Perfume cases are cuter than candles. I want to buy perfumes, but I don't use it because it is not cheap. I can display it in my room and I can enjoy them. I feel so happy that there are my favorites in my room. My room is like a toy box filled with my favorites.


People can make their rooms like they want to make. People can decide their room's wall, ceiling and floor colors. I have posters of my favorite persons or characters like ViVi's models, Audrey Hepburn and TinkerBell. I use them and photos for wall decorations. I can become surrounded by my favorites.


What's more, People can relax very well in their room. People don't have to think about anything else. My room is very homey. That's a my world. I especially like my bed the best all of things in my room. I like to read  books and watch DVDs lying on the bed. Because my bed is so comfortable, I tend to sleep before I know it sometimes. I have no mind to sleep. My room's floor is tatami, so I can sleep there in summer. 


I don't finish my room yet. I have many things for my room. Because I have western furniture, I want to change tatami to flooring. Sometime I think why all tatami is green. I wish tatami was white or green. I want to paint wall green or blue. I want a dresser, more sundry articles. I like to think about my room like that. I am enjoyed it very much. I have said that since when I was a high school student, but it is not finished yet. So I wish it was finished by I will become third grade but maybe it will take more time. 


I think that rooms betray mind condition of people whose have that room. So room's decoration is very important. Also, rooms has influence to people. Depending on room, people's condition can change. Actually, when I stayed in my host family's house, I feel very good. I waked up easily in the morning then, and I was happy everyday. The my room is very cute and fancy and the wall is dark green. There is indirect lighting. It was so comfortable. Maybe color of wall makes me comfortable. Green has power which relax people. I try decorate to my ideal.

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Wednesday, April 17, 2013

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Friday, April 12, 2013

Essay 1-01a: Dear Host Family

My name is Akari and I live in Kumamoto, Japan. I would like to thank you very much for offering your home while I am staying in Minnesota.  

I'm nineteen years old and a college student. My major is English. So, I'm glad to will be exposed real English. have an older sister and a younger brother. I quarrel with them sometimes but I am on good terms with them.

My hobby is  watching movies and listening music. I like action, SF and comedy movies. I don't like horror movies. And I often listening to Western music like pop, R&B and hip hop.
I like to play sports and I am active. I like to play tennis, basketball and ski but I am not good at swimming. I like children too. It does wonders for my mind to see children's smiles.     

My hometown, Kumamoto is famous for horse sashimi and mustard lotus. They are very good through mustard lotus is hotter than you think. And there is Kumamoto castle. It's a big old castle which was built about 400 years ago. In the spring, people go on a cherry
viewing picnic at the foot of Kumamoto castle. 
     
I had never been to overseas, so this is my first overseas visit. I have been excited to go Minnesota. I am not good at speaking English and I may have some difficulties in our communication. But I will try my best even using hard gestures. I am look forward to meeting you.
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